Don’t want to intrude - but can I offer some friendly advice on the writing? Specifically as it relates to the English (realizing it may not be your first language). Totally cool if you’re not looking for it, but perhaps I can help.
Thank you! I really appreciate the offer, and yes — English isn’t my first language, so I’m always open to friendly feedback if it helps improve the experience for players. Feel free to share any suggestions!
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Seems like a pretty good time. Could really do with a volume slider though.
Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far. A volume slider is a great idea—I’ll definitely consider adding it in a future update.
Nice start! I like what I see here.
Don’t want to intrude - but can I offer some friendly advice on the writing? Specifically as it relates to the English (realizing it may not be your first language). Totally cool if you’re not looking for it, but perhaps I can help.
Thank you! I really appreciate the offer, and yes — English isn’t my first language, so I’m always open to friendly feedback if it helps improve the experience for players. Feel free to share any suggestions!
I’ll message you on Patreon.